I am from science fiction stories and Saturday morning cartoons.
I am from summers that melt and winters that drizzle.
I am from acres of farmland, spring fruit blossoms and fall harvests.
I am from laughing voices raised over classic rock radio in crowded kitchens with kids and pets underfoot; from hand-me-downs and potlucks; camping and fishing; climbing trees and running around barefoot.
I am from mom's patience, dad's temper, brother's humor.
I am from fierceness and freckles.
I am from more-the-merrier and anything-for-family and own-your-choices.
I am from logic and reason, from compassion and kindness, and from just doing the laundry.
I am from the Emerald Isle and the Dust Bowl, pan-fried chicken and homemade biscuits.
I am from hallways lined with photo collages, doorways climbed by faded pencil marks, concrete impregnated with tiny hand prints, cedar chests filled with handmade quilts.
I am from simple homes and strong roots. From extended families and generational gatherings. From births and deaths, celebration and mourning, love and loss - all made better by the sharing.
Inspired by: Where I'm From and SFD and TwoBusy.
Zen
I really enjoyed all of this, but the second-to-last section in particular... for me, at least, that description felt wonderfully tactile and sensory-rich. Terrific.
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
ReplyDelete@TwoBusy: Thank you. I was moved by yours, as well. Which I meant to link to in my post, but forgot. Off to correct that now. :)
ReplyDelete@ SFD: Thanks for the inspiration. :)
Love your poem. Love your blog. I have just become your follower number 101!
ReplyDeleteBest thing you've written maybe ever!
ReplyDeleteLove this.
This was excellent. I read it in my reader just after Two Busy's. Nice stuff. Dare I try my own?
ReplyDeleteNice.
ReplyDeleteHey OneZenMom! I finally got around to trying it myself. It was a very fun exercise, although I didn't manage to make mine as succinct or beautiful as you did. Oh well. Ommmmmm. :-) Thanks for the inspiration. I linked back to your poem on my post. Hope that's ok.
ReplyDeleteLove, Om in Mom x